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Subject: Re: update

Fred, thank you for your tireless work! I'd like to suggest clarifying this sentence by adding the word "incorrect" -- “...attempting to change or affirm the child’s incorrect perception of their sex.” Otherwise,
professionals who use the proper pronouns for children who have a correct perception of their sex would be in violation. ~KC

On Sun, Aug 18, 2019 at 9:30 PM Lee Schoenbeck <lee@schoenbecklaw.com> wrote:
Amen

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On Aug 18, 2019, at 8:24 PM, Fred Deutsch <Fred.Deutsch@sdlegislature.gov> wrote:
That’s why I’m making road trips to visit with individual legislators, Andre. This will give them ample time to think about the bill. The trips are also good politics. Mostly you find
candidates seeking election that hit the road, but it’s relatively unheard of to expend time and money to attempt to pass a single bill. It shows the legislators we’re serious,
and it amplifies our credibility. And every little bit helps! - Fred